Sunday 15 June 2008

Success??

"Are you happy Afolabi?" Dad asks
"Yeah...Yes Daddy"
"Good, that's...good" dad says with a forced conviction that even leaks through the three perforations of the phone's handset.

This is a poem that is not against success, but questions the kind we strive for and that which is truly ours.


Scribblings for the Trigenarian

That each stage of life is separated by seconds
Is a shame and maiming truth.
Small, yet potent are these changes amidst life’s turns,
That one is thrust from childhood to Youth.
Manhood to Old age, then to
Well, your bible en-lightens that other side to you.

And now, at this stage of my life
I apologize to you, dear Trigenerian;
For not setting a strong foundation,
For that Grand sea-side semi; of your heart’s strife.
Though, I am unsure if you’ll be more forgiving,
I still risk these scribblings as your pardon’s condition.

You crave for the laurelled title; the Ideal man.
And I fear I will not aid in this quest.
Uncertainty spells you response to these words of mine,
Yet, I still offer you words seamed with trust
' In your own differences, I plea
That you find your own ideal.'

FYI: Trigenerian is not in the dictionary!!

6 comments:

NaijaBabe said...

If it isnt, pls can you tell me what it means.

This was soo good...get me thinking this monday morning. 'small, yet potent'...this is very true. Why is it that we only seem to notice the big changes. Have we become blind to the things around us because that success is the only thing we see?

Afolabi said...

@naijababe: hi, thanks for stoping by. I think your interpretation is very right and explains some parts of the poem. But you shouldn't forget that the poem leans more to the idea of a young person apologizing to his 30 year old self.

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Chris Ogunlowo said...

Hmmmm, nice one ;)

Anonymous said...

hello

Afolabi said...

@aloofar: thanks for the comment mehn..

@ pink-satin-hi, how's blogville idol goin, would have participated, but my voice is terrible, even when I speak.